Friday, January 4, 2013

Did Peter Jackson ruin The Hobbit?

SPOILER ALERT

If you've never read The Hobbit, you probably won't want to read this blog post. I try avoiding SPOILERS, but the nature of my little rant calls for it! Sorry.



Since the opening of Peter Jackson's The Hobbit: An Unexpected Journey, book and movie fans have been split into two camps: The Hobbit is a brilliant piece of movie art, or Peter Jackson destroyed Tolkien's masterwork of "children's literature." 

For the record, I really liked The Hobbit the first time I saw it, and loved it the second time. And yes, I intend to see it at least one more time. Now, I haven't double dipped on a movie in more than a decade, but The Hobbit will be a triple dip for me. So I admit, I liked it. 

Of course, like all book fans, upon my first viewing, I couldn't help but make comparisons to the book. Some of the comparisons were good (Riddles in the Dark) and some of them (the Pale Orc) were not. However, I knew going in that, just like the film versions of The Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit was an adaptation of Tolkien's work and not Tolkien's work itself. Of course, I just so happen to think that The Hobbit (part 1) is an excellent adaptation of the first third of the book, but I admit that it does have its flaws. However, one flaw that The Hobbit movie does not have -- which every critic seems to think it has -- is that a "lighthearted, whimsical children's story" has been destroyed by Peter Jackson.

The problem with this criticism is not that Peter Jackson did, or did not, ruin The Hobbit. The problem is that The Hobbit is not simply a lighthearted children's story. And if you think that is, you need to go back and re-read The Hobbit the way Tolkien intended -- thoughtfully.

Yes, The Hobbit does have a more whimsical feel to it than The Lord of the Rings. I do not deny that. That is part of its charm. And I can see why some people miss that aspect of the story. But is it as "lighthearted" as people remember? 

The truth is there are some pretty dark moments in The Hobbit, which are mitigated due to the book's frame narrative. (Professor Tolkien is re-telling a tale that he translated from Bilbo's story taken from the Red Book of West March). For much of the book, this is done in such a way that makes the story feel "lighthearted" and whimsical -- even when The Company is being chased by wargs, orcs, trolls, goblins, and are on the cusp of death in the pine forest, the narrator's voice intrudes to take the edge off of things, because after all, he is telling the story to children.

But does the actual story sound lighthearted to you? 

Well, to some people it does, and much of The Hobbit movie is anything but "lighthearted", but it's important to remember that the movie only encompasses the first third of the book. If Peter Jackson had remained completely faithful to the book what would he do with the final third of the story which takes several dramatic and unexpectedly dark turns that make The Hobbit unlike any other modern day children's tale? 

Do I have to mention the scarier parts of The Hobbit? The Spiders of Mirkwood, entering Smaug's lair, Smaug burning Lake Town to the ashes? Are these lighthearted and whimsical events? Perhaps, but the real twist takes place after Smaug is defeated and we think the story is about to end -- but it doesn't. We get another third of the book in which good guys become bad guys, heroes become villains and main characters die in an epic Battle of the Five Armies. Yes, in the book, Bilbo is knocked out just as the battle gets underway -- does anyone think that that would make for a good film? Unlikely. 

The truth is, the final third of the story is when the shit hits the fan and it becomes epic. Peter Jackson had few options when adapting the story to film. He could have been "faithful" to the book and made the first 2/3rds of the story a "lighthearted" tale (complete with a dragon burning people's homes to the ground), but that would  leave movie goers utterly shocked and horrified at the sudden dark twist at the end when Thorin and the Dwarves retake the Lonely Mountain, the men of Lake Town march on them for battle, and Thorin calls Bilbo  a "descendant of rats." 

The problem with such a "twist ending" is that it lacks foreshadowing and would never work in the context of a film. It doesn't even work in most books, but it works in The Hobbit because of the frame narrative. We are given clues by the narrator (Professor Tolkien) that "something" happens at the end of the story that we're not expecting. At one point the narrator even says something about the Battle of Five Armies, but then says, "but that doesn't come into the tale at the moment." When we first meet Thorin (in the book) the narrator says something like, "and here is Thorin Oakenshield of whom I'm sure you've heard many tales!" The idea is that we already know all about this history but that Tolkien (the narrator) is putting his own spin on things. Um, you can't do that in film or modern literature because it sounds ridiculous -- unless it's coming from Professor Tolkien himself. Which is the conceit of the frame narrative of The Hobbit.

Peter Jackson was left with no option but to foreshadow the epic feel of the last third of the story so viewers wouldn't feel like they were being baited and switched at the end. What other options are there? Have a lighthearted tale which turns horrific and terrifying at the end? In my estimation this is the brilliance of Jackson's adaptation. By foreshadowing things to come, he has made Thorin's eventual downfall all the more tragic. As someone else on another blog  recently said, Jackson has set up one of the biggest tear jerker moments in film history -- when Thorin betrays Bilbo -- and again when he eventually delivers his last line as they reconcile, people are going to weep -- and I will probably be one of them.

With that said, The Hobbit isn't a perfect movie. It's not (so far) as good as Jackson's LOTR Trilogy -- not by a long shot, but realistically I'm not sure it could have been done any other way. It has its flaws. Many of which I could go on about. However, I won't do that at the moment. I enjoyed the movie. Was it a masterpiece? No. Was it great? I'd say yes. Especially upon a second showing. 

However, for those who do want to nitpick the movie -- and I will eventually, I'm sure -- take a look at Tolkien scholar Michael Drout's thoughts on The Hobbit movie

For me, I'm just going to enjoy it for what it is, despite it's flaws. I cannot wait for part two, and The Desolation of Smaug! Hint, Hint. An evil dragon has destroyed men's lives and burns a city to ashes -- NOT a lighthearted children's tale!






4 comments:

  1. So Peter Jackson just making things up to stretch the film out over three parts is ok?

    I could understand if it was three parts long to fit the STORY in, but its just to line his pockets. He couldn't even get the bits taken from the book right!

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  2. To which portions of the film are you referring? Which parts did he just make up?

    I'm curious -- where you bothered by Jackson making things up in the LOTR films? Because, in some ways, he was way more "creative" with LOTR than he as been, thus far, with The Hobbit. Sure, the LOTR is better films -- despite the "creativity" but I'm just trying to determine how consistent you are in your criticisms.

    The only part of the film that I really didn't care for at all was the way in which Ratagast was portrayed. I thought Jackson was trying for way too much comic relief and really, really, butchered the character.

    The pale Orc is often cited as the other example of where Jackson just "made things up" -- and while that is technically true, from a story telling standpoint, it makes sense to me to have a tangible antagonist that is setting up roadblocks for the Company.

    Was it the best decision? Maybe not, but I'm just not bothered by Jackson "making up" a villain Orc for us to hate. He did the exact same thing in Return of the King, with the general Orc who leads the assault on Minas Tirith. That character is not in the book, but it doesn't seem people had much of a problem with him.

    You, like many, claim Jackson stretched out the story to line his pockets: but I'm not sure that makes much sense. Jackson is already a multi-millionaire. He may have done it for this reason, but I've seen no evidence cited thus far. Only speculation by those who are frustrated with the fact The Hobbit film wasn't exactly like the book.

    I too was frustrated with some aspects of the film -- again, Radagast -- and The Hobbit part 1 is not as good of a film as LOTR. But I don't believe it to be as terrible as many claim. And the parts that the film got right -- just like in LOTR -- were the parts that were closest to the book (Riddles in the Dark, for example).

    I'd love to continue this conversation, I just like clarification on your feelings -- and specifics -- so we can avoid a shouting match and discuss Tolkien and film with the proper sense of dialogue and respect.

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    1. In my opinion, the Hobbit is another attempt of studios to take advantage and make millions of dollars. Jackson had little respect for Tolkien's story in the LOTR ring trilogy. He and his female screen writers were too interested in writing in female roles that did not appear in the book. When you start changing the major story points, at the end you have a different inferior story? The Hobbit should have been made as one movie...3 movies is joke! The first movie covers 119 pages but adds story that does not happen in Tolkien's world and does not work. The parts that Jackson and his crew wrote falls on it's face. Even when Jackson stays true to the book, he blows it. For example in the riddle game, Bilbo does not know the answer to Gollum's last riddle but asks for more time but only says "time"....works great in terms of a drama for a movie but in the movie he know the answer to the vary hard riddle. Obviously his screenwriters do not have respect for Tolkien. It has nothing to do with being a Tolkien geek. Jackson and his crew took an excellent set of material and changed huge swaths of the material because they feel like they are better story tellers. They bank on the fact that many of the current generation has not read Tolkien. Just think of what could have been in terms of praise if they stayed true to Tolkien. Oh well, the books will stand the test of time but these movies will fall into the annals of mediocrity. The billions that the movies are not the test of real success. Just think, JRR Tolkien made very money but he is more famous that Jackson and his worthless screen writers.

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  3. I waited to watch this movie on VUDU fo 5.99 and I am so glad. Again, Jackson and his screen writers think that they are more adept at writing than Tolkien and go off on a tangent. The Hobbit was an excellent store and easy to adapt to film but Jackson and the studio's greed ruined it. Azog was never in the book...his son Bolg is the leader at the end of the movie, there was never a hunt by the orcs which Tolkien called Goblins in the Hobbit, and so much more. Even the most dramatic scene where Biblo yelled out "Time" to gain more time for the riddle but it was actually the answer. Jackson's writer butchered that scene. There are 119 pages of the story but Jackson's film is a clumsy Wikipedia version of the book. How much more can his writers butcher of Tolkien's story. JRR is rolling in his grave. Funny the best scenes are the one's that are closest to the book but Jackson can't figure that out. His female screen writers think that they are better writers and have no respect for Tolkien.

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